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Render me sinful by flutterby Published on 10/14/2008


Nobody knows it
Nobody knows
The warm air at night
Feels of sedation
Looks of tranquil
They're all oblivious
Of my ecstasy
They don't know
You're my favourite pill

You take me to another level of high
There's no other drug that could take me on this kind of verge
Dose me up on your fixtures; hit me with your dangers
Damage me sweetly; I'm in need to be purged

I want you in me
I need to inhale all of your toxins
Kiss me with your poisoned lips
I need to breathe in all of your sins
Letting my body consume your harmful venom
As I'll exhale contently
Feeling my consciousness succumb

There's no escaping the sudden rush, igniting all my senses to be awoken
How can you be so innocent, yet so guilty?
You urge me placidly jaded, as I willingly surrender with submission
I'm in love with your rough rogue, how you’re so touchable, yet left untamed
I'm addicted with your robbery, the way you abduct all that I’ am
Oh divine ravisher, I'm yours to be claimed

I've fallen undeniably for your violating ways
I'm obsessed with that feeling of wanting you too much
Grasping you intimately close, our bodies pressing, raging against each others'
And still the proximity is nowhere near enough

Take me to that other world
Beyond adrenaline, better than anyone's fantasy
Melt into me; I want to soak up your ruins
Feed me your burden, I want to steal you away
Give me all that you are; wrap me up in the night
Render me yielded and admit our tatters to fray

When the night is over and your impulsive affects begin to fade
I'll softly moan out satisfaction, your essence still obvious upon my flesh
My makeup streaked, your scent still lingering sweet among every inch of my body
With your finger-grips impudently marked red on my skin, fresh
I'll wander around absent-mindedly in your reverie
Sharing my absolute rapture with the world, high on pure abandonment
So everyone will be known of my perfect ecstasy


 



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Comments

Heart Rakes So Lows And Highs commented on 02/07/2010
Your poetry's on fire

flutterby commented on 02/08/2010
ahah, thank you ^^ I'm rlly glad you enjoy it :] xo

hesitantfred commented on 02/07/2010
I love this. Seductive, alluring, wonderfully written. The forbidden love is often the most enticing and exciting. Thank you for showing us all this!

flutterby commented on 02/07/2010
awh! thank you for reading it :] hehe. i love ur comment, such nice compliments ^^ does the ego good haha. xo

mt.suhail commented on 01/31/2010
such a love............

flutterby commented on 02/07/2010
oh wow, i haven't had someone comment on this for a loong time hehe. thank you :] xo

saad ahmed commented on 11/28/2008
what to say you have said everything i feel weak and wish to perish in to my loves arms ......some one please hold me ....your words are bewitching

flutterby commented on 12/07/2008
wow i adore that line: ""I wish to perish into my loves arms"" it's beautiful. I'll keep that one in mind. your compliments and comments always leave me smiling :] thank you for those words. xx

Akinsanya commented on 11/13/2008
seduction at its best portrayed. Perfect. Its one great piece.

flutterby commented on 12/07/2008
awh thank you so very much :] xx

DeadlyDelight commented on 11/03/2008
firstly soz for being a stranger for a bit. Lucy, i read this poem about three times and it struck me that it's perfect in every way...and I'm left speechless.the passion and just the way your poem flows... erotic sensation. love it!!! :) xoxoxox

flutterby commented on 11/05/2008
heyy bootiful! :] it's great to hear frm u, bin a while. I haven't been on here until now, gave it a rest yet again lol. thank you so mush ^^ yeh I definitely wanted the poem to be near perfection lol. the ending was soo frustrating to come up with. I finally settled on the girl wandering around with her sins stained all over her for all to see. I thought it'd fit pritty well lol. I'm so glad you felt that intense passion I deeply wanted to illustrate ^^ your comments are always the best by far :] I? am truly obliged for them <3 xxx

poewhit commented on 10/18/2008
You painted that picture well. A lot of heart felt passion in the poem, [ THE BEAST IS LOOSE ]

flutterby commented on 11/05/2008
sorry for the late reply. thanks heaps for ur comment :] does my mind good knowing I fulfilled what I wanted to reflect. rlly wanted to bring forth that burning desire people often crave towards one another. thank you for ur time :] xx

Genevieve commented on 10/17/2008
""Passion on fire"" ... Nice indeed! Vieve x

flutterby commented on 11/05/2008
real sorry I haven't replied to ur acknowledgement of my poem till now. rlly love your simple comment :] thx very much for your time and leaving those praising words :] xx

mykell commented on 10/16/2008
Raw, Savage,Gothic sweetness

flutterby commented on 11/05/2008
so sorry I'm replying to your comment jst now. I love those 4 words you used to describe my poem :] they compliment it perfectly. I especially love the use of 'gothic sweetness' lol, that's the kind of manner I wanted to write in. so gratifying to know someone picked that up. thanks a bunch :] xx

afriza78 commented on 10/16/2008
Aaaww.. behave..

poedes commented on 10/15/2008
This is a very deep and seductive piece you've chosen your words with abundance just as the sex you so sweetly discribe its fascinating and wonderful this piece. bless you

flutterby commented on 10/15/2008
your words are so merciful and sincere, thankyouu so much for them and your praise. they warm my heart and ease my mind :] xx

Cherry commented on 10/15/2008
I use to say being in lovers arms?feeling him..his smell? all are the highest drug?No drug can be as much ecstatic as it is. But I cudn?t write it n you have done it with your excellent skill. Love dis work. Very wonderful brilliant work! Cherry

flutterby commented on 10/15/2008
I'm sure you could describe what it's like. I've never had this experience, whereas it sounds like you have. you'd be speaking from pure reminiscence and expression, rather than me writing frm imagination and influences lol. a song actually inspired this one, called 'sex on fire' by kings of Leon. then I jst gathered my thoughts/fantasies and laid them down in words the best way I could. It?s rlly gratifying to know you enjoyed this piece and think I have skills :] hehe. thanks a bunch ^^ xx

Cherry commented on 10/15/2008
LOL, shhh... I'm single honey.. but I can feel it but I didnt have it..lol..take care

mystery commented on 10/14/2008
Tasting the forbidden fruit ignites the body and hypnotizes the mind. Sensual bit of seduction here. Nicely done!

flutterby commented on 10/15/2008
thanks very much :] I hope I attained the raw passion and sultry manner I wanted to portray. xx

fellwalker commented on 10/14/2008
very erotic, very well written, the feeling of total abandonment shouts out from this! good one lucy x

flutterby commented on 10/15/2008
that was definitely my intentions :] to define what'd be like to abandon all senses and awareness, letting one's self evade control and becoming lost in complete surrender. thanks alot for your time nd ur words :] xx




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