flutterby
commented on 02/08/2010
ahah, thank you ^^ I'm rlly glad you enjoy it :] xo
hesitantfred
commented on 02/07/2010
I love this. Seductive, alluring, wonderfully written. The forbidden love is often the most enticing and exciting. Thank you for showing us all this!
flutterby
commented on 02/07/2010
awh! thank you for reading it :] hehe. i love ur comment, such nice compliments ^^ does the ego good haha. xo
mt.suhail
commented on 01/31/2010
such a love............
flutterby
commented on 02/07/2010
oh wow, i haven't had someone comment on this for a loong time hehe. thank you :] xo
saad ahmed
commented on 11/28/2008
what to say you have said everything i feel weak and wish to perish in to my loves arms ......some one please hold me ....your words are bewitching
flutterby
commented on 12/07/2008
wow i adore that line: ""I wish to perish into my loves arms"" it's beautiful. I'll keep that one in mind. your compliments and comments always leave me smiling :] thank you for those words. xx
Akinsanya
commented on 11/13/2008
seduction at its best portrayed. Perfect. Its one great piece.
flutterby
commented on 12/07/2008
awh thank you so very much :] xx
DeadlyDelight
commented on 11/03/2008
firstly soz for being a stranger for a bit. Lucy, i read this poem about three times and it struck me that it's perfect in every way...and I'm left speechless.the passion and just the way your poem flows... erotic sensation. love it!!! :) xoxoxox
flutterby
commented on 11/05/2008
heyy bootiful! :] it's great to hear frm u, bin a while. I haven't been on here until now, gave it a rest yet again lol. thank you so mush ^^ yeh I definitely wanted the poem to be near perfection lol. the ending was soo frustrating to come up with. I finally settled on the girl wandering around with her sins stained all over her for all to see. I thought it'd fit pritty well lol. I'm so glad you felt that intense passion I deeply wanted to illustrate ^^ your comments are always the best by far :] I? am truly obliged for them <3 xxx
poewhit
commented on 10/18/2008
You painted that picture well. A lot of heart felt passion in the poem, [ THE BEAST IS LOOSE ]
flutterby
commented on 11/05/2008
sorry for the late reply. thanks heaps for ur comment :] does my mind good knowing I fulfilled what I wanted to reflect. rlly wanted to bring forth that burning desire people often crave towards one another. thank you for ur time :] xx
Genevieve
commented on 10/17/2008
""Passion on fire"" ... Nice indeed!
Vieve x
flutterby
commented on 11/05/2008
real sorry I haven't replied to ur acknowledgement of my poem till now. rlly love your simple comment :] thx very much for your time and leaving those praising words :] xx
mykell
commented on 10/16/2008
Raw, Savage,Gothic sweetness
flutterby
commented on 11/05/2008
so sorry I'm replying to your comment jst now. I love those 4 words you used to describe my poem :] they compliment it perfectly. I especially love the use of 'gothic sweetness' lol, that's the kind of manner I wanted to write in. so gratifying to know someone picked that up. thanks a bunch :] xx
afriza78
commented on 10/16/2008
Aaaww.. behave..
poedes
commented on 10/15/2008
This is a very deep and seductive piece you've chosen your words with abundance just as the sex you so sweetly discribe its fascinating and wonderful this piece.
bless you
flutterby
commented on 10/15/2008
your words are so merciful and sincere, thankyouu so much for them and your praise. they warm my heart and ease my mind :] xx
Cherry
commented on 10/15/2008
I use to say being in lovers arms?feeling him..his smell? all are the highest drug?No drug can be as much ecstatic as it is. But I cudn?t write it n you have done it with your excellent skill. Love dis work. Very wonderful brilliant work!
Cherry
flutterby
commented on 10/15/2008
I'm sure you could describe what it's like. I've never had this experience, whereas it sounds like you have. you'd be speaking from pure reminiscence and expression, rather than me writing frm imagination and influences lol.
a song actually inspired this one, called 'sex on fire' by kings of Leon. then I jst gathered my thoughts/fantasies and laid them down in words the best way I could. It?s rlly gratifying to know you enjoyed this piece and think I have skills :] hehe. thanks a bunch ^^ xx
Cherry
commented on 10/15/2008
LOL, shhh... I'm single honey.. but I can feel it but I didnt have it..lol..take care
mystery
commented on 10/14/2008
Tasting the forbidden fruit ignites the body and hypnotizes the mind. Sensual bit of seduction here. Nicely done!
flutterby
commented on 10/15/2008
thanks very much :] I hope I attained the raw passion and sultry manner I wanted to portray. xx
fellwalker
commented on 10/14/2008
very erotic, very well written, the feeling of total abandonment shouts out from this!
good one lucy
x
flutterby
commented on 10/15/2008
that was definitely my intentions :] to define what'd be like to abandon all senses and awareness, letting one's self evade control and becoming lost in complete surrender.
thanks alot for your time nd ur words :] xx