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LOOKING BACK by fellwalker Published on 06/29/2009


Looking back now, on those years,

Did I shed, so many tears,

Allow myself, to fall apart,

And let them break my trusting heart?

 

Was I so fragile, fucking weak,

To cower down, so mild and meek?

Let their lying, thieving ways,

Break me, and my chosen days?

 

I stumbled, staggered, almost fell,

Into a hopeless, self-made hell.

And all the while, they watched, and smiled,

As all their lies, my wit, beguiled!

 

`Till then, I saw, was nigh too late,

They had no right, decide my fate!

It took some while, it took some-one,

To show, I could, again be strong

 

She came, and smiled, and took my hand,

She pulled me up, and helped me stand.

She made me pause, and realise,

My life had been, `till then, mere lies!

 

And so, my life, moves on, somehow,

With her beside me, stronger now.

She showed me love, made me believe,

My future lies, with Genevieve!



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Comments

karishma_dhama commented on 07/06/2009
enjoyed it.

fellwalker commented on 07/06/2009
thank you, i am pleased that you enjoyed it! x

Genevieve commented on 06/30/2009
Deeply moved by this poem written from the heart my fellwalker! You are loved ... all my life. Marvelous write! Your Vieve forever xxxxx

fellwalker commented on 07/06/2009
thank you my vieve, it was written from the heart! xxx

louise commented on 06/30/2009
It flows along lovely.Enjoyed reading it.x

fellwalker commented on 07/06/2009
thank you louise, good to hear from you again! x

Cherry commented on 06/29/2009
Wonderful expression of love, a love come and light up ur whole. Loved it.. xx

fellwalker commented on 07/06/2009
thank you very much atika xx

mystery commented on 06/29/2009
Beautiful expression of the power of love!

fellwalker commented on 07/06/2009
thanks mysty, it is marvellous what love can do!! xx

fellwalker commented on 06/29/2009
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