Register | Login | Help
Search a member
Profile   /   Forum  /   Community   /   Story NEW   /   Journal   /  Famous Poetry   /   Publish

                                                                                    
Profile
  
Poetry
  
Faves
       
Featured Work

Not a Child


~~

open scary eyes

of a naked three years old boy

weaker, blacker, bony body

laying on a hot sandy ground

cold skin fuels the sand

sun flames let him burn

waterless, wordless, breast less

dried unspoken tongue

bugs here and there on the body

and in his open mouth

jammed heart beat

uncertain breaths

certain hopelessness

in drought habitat Africa


View complete work




  Not a Child
  comment: 11 rating: 5   November 5th, 2007 add to my favourite writing list

  Blame Game
  comment: 13 rating: 4.5   October 30th, 2007 add to my favourite writing list

  I'm Jeech
  comment: 4 rating: 5   October 25th, 2007 add to my favourite writing list


Favourite Work (View all)

Favourite Artists (Total 0 favourites)













Advertise this profile page:
http://www.8hop.com/jeechoscopy



jeechoscopy's profile


Subscribe | Add to Favourite | Add to Friends | Send a Message


view profile image
  Name: Jeech A
  Nickname: Jeech
  Gender: Male
  Occupation: Other
  City: Not Entered
  Country: Pakistan
  Zodiac Sign: SCORPIO
  Languages: Urdu, Punjabi, Malvi, English
  Mood:
  Influences: Current Worlds
  Birthday: Not Entered
  One sentence to describe myself: Sprit has it's own language
  Member since: 2007-10-22

  Last Login: August 30th, 2008 16:35:56

  lifestory: I still can't lift the stone that I ever tried to do in my youngage, so I'm as young as I ever been. That's all of my 32 years life-story.


Friends List (Total 11 friends)




Group List (Total 0 groups)






vimal
November 26th, 2007 09:36:45
Opppsss...


Sorry abt tht....wished you instead of wishing someone else..


vimal
November 26th, 2007 09:35:15
Happy Birthday...


Many happy returns of the day...don't know how you celebrate your b'day...but i hope and wish that you be surrounded by love and peace in the same joyous way as on this special day...may your life be a celebration for everyone to rejoice...God bless..


vimal
November 26th, 2007 07:46:37
Re: Re: we are all one


      Quote:
jeechoscopy said:Re: we are all one
Your poem "One is all..." unleashes what I have been trying to understand long before. Once I tried to spiritually travel into the people of the past and the future... I really experience the same "amaze" that I did reading your poem. Though your attempt in the artistic poem is worth to praise but the idea is more powerful than the wording itself. It gives quite a prophet blink of light in mind.
I love to hear more from you my friend.

It is a beautiful and mystical journey. And am amazed at the same time delighted to learn you are awake…you seek so shall you discover…The soul traveling boundless ,rebuffing time and space…the strength of knowing there’s only now…no past no future…its all now…knowing this your attempt of reaching out to people shall be accomplished…our souls can travel limitlessly, if only we listened to our inner voice… My poem is your voice…otherwise you wouldn’t have recognized it. You’ll always hear from me…as long as you wish to...cause I wish the same…


jeechoscopy
November 25th, 2007 09:37:26
Re: we are all one


      Quote:
vimal said:we are all one
"Being all humankind in one might a exaggerated experience. How energetic to be that"your comment..seemed like you ver amazed...but its the ultimate truth...the one's who want to hear the truth evolve into higher consciousness,we're part of the cosmological cycle..an energy living forever just as we...our body is justa matter...for him to experience life and the uniqueness of our creation..he & we co creators...

Your poem "One is all..." unleashes what I have been trying to understand long before. Once I tried to spiritually travel into the people of the past and the future... I really experience the same "amaze" that I did reading your poem. Though your attempt in the artistic poem is worth to praise but the idea is more powerful than the wording itself. It gives quite a prophet blink of light in mind.
I love to hear more from you my friend.


vimal
November 20th, 2007 07:38:53
we are all one


"Being all humankind in one might a exaggerated experience. How energetic to be that"your comment..seemed like you ver amazed...but its the ultimate truth...the one's who want to hear the truth evolve into higher consciousness,we're part of the cosmological cycle..an energy living forever just as we...our body is justa matter...for him to experience life and the uniqueness of our creation..he & we co creators...


You must sign in to leave a comment




Tell A Friend about - contact